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TheChulFinalNarrative

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I believe that events, memories, and experiences shape us into who we ultimately become-- but does anyone ever officially “become” anything? We’re changing all the time, witnessing new events; discovering new ideas. Years, months, minutes, and seconds continuously mold and revise our individual being.

As of right now, I am Chelsea Sue Allen. I am artistic, musical, and introspective, as well as countless other things. I love my family more than anything else in the world, and I know that I am loved back immensely. Having such an amazing family has helped me get to where I am today; has helped me to become responsible and independent.

These are important claims about your identity which need support (arguments = claims plus reasons). In this case, an episode from your life that involves your family might well establish the point.

Though now being up at college for the first time, living on my own, has made me realize how tough, how heartbreaking it is, to be independent and strong when all you want to do is run back to the warmth of your family. I’m finally getting the hang of it now though, and have begun to immerse myself into this new stage of my life. I just put on The Beatles, who have been my favorite band since childhood, and get down to work.

I am a daredevil yet scaredy-cat. While I do let loose and go crazy, I am a constant worrier and over thinker. But I guess in the end it all balances out someway or another.

Again, these are important claims that need support.

All in all I am who I am because of the decisions I make and the actions I take; and so far I’d have to say that I regret nothing. What good are regrets anyway? Just another thing to feel bad about- and no one needs that weighing them down. Surely I’ve made “mistakes”- everyone has and always will-, but I believe that mistakes are just life, and life is difficultly beautiful. In the end all the scraps form together to create an intricate masterpiece, better known as your life, which is most likely pretty incredible if you can take a step back to realize it.

I really liked the descriptions and details throughout TheWarmthFinalNarrative.

In PrimeFinalNarrative I connected to the fact that he used experiences to describe who he was.